- read off PPT at start - not best presentation style
- brilliant use of clip- really captures audience attention
- reference to target audience - could be in more detail
- clear rehearsal - good pace and timing
- good textual analysis and use of media terminology in trailer analysis
- would investigation benefit from focusing on one film rather franchise
- good to see representation and stereotyping but again a little more depth would be good
- again, social media links show research but not a huge amount of analysis/depth
- excellent structure and good delivery but probably needed to address wider media issues and make it clearer
significance - 2
structure - 4
simplicity - 4
rehearsal - 4
My presentation
led to a more critical investigation as there were many questions raised after
my presentation had finished. Some of the questions were should I focus on one
text or use a multiple to make my critical investigation look in depth as I would
be able to use many more examples. In terms of my critical investigation, I believe
that I have to make my question more clearer and focus on the main question of ‘Audience
Pleasures’ to make my critical investigation more clearer.